Boy oh boy - this page took me forever and a day to complete. The rain effects were a pain (I hope it actually reads!), so that taught me a lesson - I'll think long and hard before doing another 'rain page' (though this scene still needs to play out on next week's page… Other than that I am very happy with how this one turned out. Some interesting panels (I hope), not too cluttered with dialogue and again we learn a little bit more about our characters. I wonder what 'the stranger' is saying in the sixth panel. Clearly he is not happy with something…it might just be that he's getting a it fed up with being put through all these motions without really knowing who or what he's doing them with/for…and for what reason? Thanks for all the comments on last week's pinup…there will be more of those in the future!
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