The Devon Legacy Prologue
Issue 02 Page 21

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Issue 02 Page 21

JustNoPoint
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I made it today! Late but oh well. Time to start the next page for tomorrow!!! Finally back to Sally. The Cyro Grands want her to go help Fenny it seems… personally I think this is a cruel way to try and get her to join in but who am I to judge a superior race?

Dark Clown: I almost added a box showing his thoughts "Note to self, hate humans." But figured it may be funnier without it and I wanted to prevent showing what they are thinking unless they are talking to other Cyro Grands.

dueeast: Glad I brought a bit of laughter into your day. The comic isn't 100% serious ^_^

Peipei: YAY! I've seen you pop in every once in a while. Thanks for stopping by and checking up!

oneminutecomics: Makes me feel good to know the last panel went over so well. Gotta get to work on a monster for you after I finish the next page!

RapidoBlue: Nope, he's just so thrilled about it all too XD

Hapoppo: Hiya! Glad to see you stop in. I was assuming my comic wasn't your cup of tea. Which is cool, I'm not one of those people that comment on a comic only if you comment on mine. I hope you are able to find 22 pages that you can use well for your book. If you cut the pages where Sally is writing in her diary in issue 1-1 you should have a decent presentation.

mlai: Despite wanting to push the book along quicker I want to get better as well. Feel free to always criticize! I can learn a lot from you. When I need to practice I focus on "those" areas as I draw. I can only improve bits at a time then I move on to try and improve something else.

But I'm not done improving on the things you mentioned yet. Still gotta ways to go. Especially solidifying the joints. I noticed another curved leg a couple pages back, ugh. I tried to play with the limbs on the aliens in this page but somehow he came out very proportional instead o_O Got to try again next page.

that kid yellow: ^_^ Me likes explosions and action :D

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