The Devon Legacy Prologue
Issue 3 Page 44

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Issue 3 Page 44

JustNoPoint
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1 more page remaining. Tomorrow is the last story progression you'll see for the next 2 weeks. Time to relax a bit. Play some games, watch some tv and do all the other stuff I rarely do when "always working on my comic".

I'm going to try and learn a few new tricks to make Issue 4 even more visually appealing as well.

Don't forget to check out Off Hours

usedbooks: Interesting is an understatement. Undergarment and internet never means "not-revealing" =P

dueeast: Thanks, I tried to step up the cell shade style a hair in these last pages. Since it may be the last time I use it. Issue 4 will use the shading style I showed in my X-mas update.

blntmaker: Wait, "nice reveal for Sally"? Which context are you using that in? XD

DAJB: Should I dub them over-undergarments? Took me a long time to figure out exactly how Sally should react. I am actually still going back into scripts and altering the ways she acts later to fit the trauma better.

Tantz Aerine: Excellent. That is exactly what I wanted coming across!

mlai: I could had used that feedback MUCH earlier haha
I thought about all kinds of ways to do their thoughts. I color coordinated each box to each grand. Besides generic Cyro Grands, they all get a yellow box. Who cares which generic one is "speaking" =p
I figured it would be more confusing to have just a color for bad and a color for good. The good aliens talk to each other more than they talk to the bad aliens. I'll do more with different fonts later as well. A good thing about this prologue is that it will make my actual story much better cause I am learning so much making this mini series.

DrProfessorman: Got it, expect something by Friday ^^

kyupol: Nah, I didn't study too much into the alien stuff. I tried to google what you referenced but mostly got hair color sites :P

man in black: Thanks, that means a lot!

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