Last page was actually Fenny launching herself. She didn't slip. My original layout would have been much clearer as it was going to be straight side view. However I decided to go a bit more dynamic by attempting to have Fenny leap toward the screen. I figured it would look like a slip at 1st but I think this page and the next will help to show it was a leap.
Keep in mind Fenny has super strength and endurance. Which is why this devastating landing didn't injure her much.
The last panel I did an eye swirly effect. For about a year I have known I may do this. I didn't know if I wanted to cartoon up this comic that much or not. You may notice I don't use chibis and such. Basically what finally made me decide to go ahead and use the swirly effect for this comedic purpose is that mlai got away with it in Fight using Cat. Reading mlai and Ed's comments on the "comedic disfigurement" made me see the light a bit to add swirly eyes as they had been in my draft.
usedbooks: The whole undercover friend thing dictates LOTS of smiling!
Greyman: I'm going to shatter your dream a hair here =P I figure it has to do with Sally being her best friend. She even lived with Sally for a few years after her parents died. Also the name Sona is kinda similar to Sally and Sona looks a bit like Sally. Perhaps however I should have had Fenny call her Sally Flourent Hess instead and that may have seemed more natural. Also Fenny has been remebering her boyfriend in the dream since she "got here". Sally isn't the 1st thing she's remembered. Um… or you can keep thinking your reason :3
mlai: LOL you don't have room to talk. I've been following your amnesiac cast for over 40 pages with little information XD The issues 29 pages, info will come soon enough. Also this is the 2nd time Fenny has been compared to Xena. Greyman did so back in issue 2. I never saw much of Xena so actually I don't know what you mean *wink :( As for male cast… soon. Also you already know I get one later. You helped me with tips on his robotic arm. He comes in after the prologue (issue 7)
Tantz Aerine: I really like energetic arm movements =D
trevoramueller: landing seems to = much worse!
albone: She lost her shoes =( The wall caught her though :D
kyupol: Fenny is a chicken joke #3 You're running out of material Kyupol! Although you inspired me to have a character nickname Fenny Henny. The character nicknames everyone and I didn't have one for Fenny yet!
DrProfessorman: If you check this pic out I merely drew 6 arms hah Not much to it, just make the hands open and arms flailing!
newgirlcomic: Well the slidewalk was smooth till Fenny tried running and landing…
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