The Devon Legacy Prologue
Issue 5 Page 08

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Issue 5 Page 08

JustNoPoint
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Phew, okay.

Anyway, as per my usual attempt to improve in an area mlai points out to me, I have slowed down my sketching. Instead of speed sketching I just tried to draw old school without too many extra lines.
For heavy action scenes later I will probably have to quick sketch and then go back and re "draw sketch". I feel I make much better action scenes when I quick sketch for flow purposes.
I hope this improves my final images better.

If you have not checked out mlai's comic Fight/Fight2 you really should. And you would see why I blindly try to listen to all feedback he gives me! If I don't try to improve in the areas he suggests I don't feel it worth his time to continue looking here with his skill and knack for mostly only wanting to read top tier work. (I hope you don't mind me using you as a main drive =P)

For those of you that missed my friend Sominous's update yesterday, I kept feeling worse as the day progressed and finally went to the hospital, that's what delayed this page.
They hooked me to an IV (I hate those things with much passion) and filled me with liquids and medicines. I had apparently lost too much fluid too quickly. The result a massive headache that halted EVERYTHING yesterday.

Gonna reply to everyone's comments from yesterday now as well, so if you want to click back a page to see those you can!

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