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Issue 5 Pages 16 -17

JustNoPoint

on May 13, 2008

Okay, after I got feedback that the page I put up Monday was a bit unclear I decided to remake the war scene. I really really hope it's easier to tell what is going on now. I also hope I made it more dynamic. I tried to think of different sections as panels, no random faces added this time, everything is doing 'something'.

This page turned out quite well IMO, as long and as hard as I worked on it I hope it works much better than the last page I made. Please above all else let me know when something is unclear whenever I update. Clarity is probably the top priority for me.
I also tried another method for the Grands to 'speak' I hope it is better than the boxes I used to use.

I have a few links for you

Fenny and Sally make a … ahem… cameo in Convenient Hell, my friend's comic.

You can view a smaller image of the battle here. Though it's really hard to read.

And you can view the page I deleted here.