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Issue 5 Page 27

JustNoPoint

on June 11, 2008

AGH!!! This page took FOREVER!

Trying MANY MANY new things. I have to get better at explosions. I think this turned out real well!

I have no clue if this layout flows properly. Another experimental layout. I'm wondering if I should have at least added another border underneath the spot where Power explodes and the scene where you see the explosion headed towards Phern, Pulna, and Codo.

Though adding another border may mess up the look I wanted, despite the fact that the top may confuse the reader, overall I really like this page.

I hope I got all the color bleeds. They are being tricky now!

EDIT: I replaced the image to hopefully fix the connecting explosions issue. You can see the old image here.
Now it looks like the panel where Power explodes should be read before the one where he talks =(

Though the page 'looks' cool like this, I dub it a failed experiment for flow purposes and will not make another page lay out like this. Ah well, I learned a lot and I still really like the page. I can't beat myself up every time I screw up. As long as I learn from it it's no big deal.