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Issue 5 Page 41

JustNoPoint

on July 13, 2008

So much for doing the whole update every day till I finish thing huh? Ah well. Here's 1 extra update anyway.

I finished rewriting the script for this issue on paper (not just mentally) and it will be 48 pages. Longest issue yet. My original script had it only being 30 pages long. But That script was over a year old and I have learned a lot since then.

In fact, I plan to redo all the scripts for future issues again. This prologue has been an immense help/learning experience.

hoya999 is the only person that figured out what the last page was about. Considering how abrupt the scene and everything changed (straight into Fenny dying!!!) had it not been a dream that would have been some terrible pacing and writing on my part =p

I find it funny, lately I have been dropping more hints at Sally's chosen abilities. No one is picking up on them. But in earlier issues everyone was finding powers in places I wasn't even intending lol. I guess everyone forgot to look for signs of Sally's chosen ability.

Another blast from the past. I bet everyone thought I forgot about that Command Ship Fenny and Sally helped the Cyros acquire back in issue 2. See, that issue was relevant after all!