The Fat Bastard
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Fat Bastard's BBQ pg.6
PJBRO onthis one came pretty easy…
…tho the storytelling is a bit weaker than i would have liked. Panel 4 was intended to be a 3 panel sequence but in an effort to make the page less jumbled and also in an effort to save time, i opted to make it a wide shot to show the viewer a bit more of the facade of FB's house.
However, in doing that I missed on the storytelling opportunity to show FB slamming the door, which I realized after-the-fact was a key element to the success of that scene.
but there are some nice bits too, so enjoy :)
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