The Last Quest

on Oct. 21, 2007

Oni leaves Choodori with her EAL master and leaves Choodori emotionally in pieces.

Thanks again for critique and feedback! it really helps me to keep going!
yeah I'm updating pretty fast but that's because i have quite a few pages already saved on my computer and i am just posting them pretty quickly so if after a while i dont update as fast you'll know why…

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