The Outcasters
Author notes
Chapter One Page One
Selena on Okay, so the first page is FINALLY up! I'm quite happy with how this page turned out. The last panel text box order is:
"They hunted us for game."
"We were hunted - slaughtered. Killed by the furless, two leg walkers."
"They had these sticks with pointed rock. They could throw them, but I don't know how. They held them in their paws firmly…"
"With one strike of the stick, our brethren would fall to the ground, crimson blood soaking the earth."
Also, the last panel is like a flashback, that's why it has white around the outsides.
We introduce two main characters - Jaggedtooth, the brown wolf and his daughter Selena. Jaggedtooth is telling Selena the stories of their past - the stories that she has not yet heard from the Shamans.
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