The Planet Closest To Heaven

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JillyFoo

on July 24, 2006

Hey guys I'd really like to hear your opinions on this comic here: http://www.drunkduck.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3834

TPCTH also got a strange creative writing review here: http://webcomicwatch.blogspot.com/2006/07/review-14-in-which-dr-haus-attempts-to.html

So far I most of the critiques go on the idea… TPCTH needs setting development! I wondering if I should go all out after this chapter and do a monologue intro like One Question and Hurrocks Fardel or should I review some of the past info more clearly(Danireans, and places), or should I continue what I'm doing and have the characters talk about it laters?