The Planet Closest To Heaven

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visions11p9

JillyFoo

on Jan. 4, 2007

Felt so bad for not updating last week.

I'm about halfway done with making the print. Rewriting the dialogue I got to visions6p12 and was like ahhhhh! I can't do this!!! So I made a page instead.

This page was about one fourth of the paper. I couldn't make the other panels work so…after so much drawing and erasing everything… I just made these two panels a page. I think I got my head on now. How I want the scenario to go. (I think this is like the 3rd time in this comic where I had the last panel be a dumb question…bad writing…) I think though it's better than nothing at all. (Thinking about it: It IS in Starla's character to ask that. She was obsessed with why was Scout gone in chapter 6. Don't worry. I promise I won't continue the scenario with chibi explaining or extreme dialogue backtrack. I promise that will not happen. I have a sweet plan.I know what I'm doing..I think.)

Some of you guys are getting really awesome at updating almost everyday. (Just to let you know: I envy you.) So I should just keep moving forward and get this over with. Then I will get to the fun scenarios.
Trying for one page a week.