The Planet Closest To Heaven

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visions11p14

JillyFoo

on Feb. 17, 2007

This took me a bit. I'm running out of quality pens to ink the pages with. Most of this one is done with ballpoint pen. I ink DE in ballpoint, but don't really want TPCTH to be inked that way.

Now for page explanation. Scout got "saved" by Luka before Nameless killed Speedy Mcnee. And lets just say Scout didn't hear Terry's rant about what has happened in visions9p29. He kinda jumped in when everyone looked like they were going to attack Starla.
So he didn't know that the Danireans were THAT dangerous.

Finally the scenario is going where I want it to. It all leads up to this. Oooooh the drama! I hope the dialogue makes since. Starla is talking very sarcastic and spitefully if you would hear her. I'm sorry for so much reflection of past events, but I think it's important. Everything has to be set up so the audience can understand the characters motivations. Everything!