The Planet Closest To Heaven

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JillyFoo

on June 3, 2007

I think I gave away too much on this one. Shame on me! Shame Shame! ;_;

I was working on composition on this page. My summer art teacher said if I wanted to bring my work to a higher level I should work on composition…as if the page were an abstract picture.. :/
(and make the lines where the figure is closer thicker.)

So this page is the result. Only thing I'd change is the dialogue balloon in panel 5 to a whisper bubble.. however I'd do that.

END OF CHASE AND BIENFANG SCENARIO

One last scenario and the chapter is OVER!