The Planet Closest To Heaven

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JillyFoo

on Nov. 29, 2007

I was barely able to get this done tonight. There's a good chance I might not make next or the one after's update because of finals week and Florida vacation.

I do wish I can do more. These conversation pages are really hard on the readers because the talk isn't all at once. I just can't bring myself to pile too much dialogue into a page. I'll try to do the same thing as the Pepe roasts Scout scene and have a script ready to panel the pages all at once.

Let's talk about the page.
Looking for an excuse to draw the beast. Looks like the evolved form of the "dorkfish". It's such a stupid looking monster…it's hilarious. Scout and Starla were planned to be back turned at panel 1 ,but those feet look so cool! I didn't want to cover up the monster feet.
Whatever the thing is…it's not an intelligent creature, so it can't talk. Not all animal danireans can talk.