The Pure Soul

Chapter 8 - Pages 4 & 5

on April 8, 2007

A good example of streamlining. This dialogue originally stretched across about five pages but the pacing of this story doesn't allow for that much exposition time.

On these pages:

I'm pretty sure it doesn't read right but Mati is laying her head on Montori's shoulder in that last panel.

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