The Rebirth of Heizan

Prologue: 01

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Prologue: 01

Ryushin
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These two are brothers and sisters, Mieku (the guy) and Keianna, Mieku's sister. His sister has a habit of punching him across the room when he does something stupid. I'm still just beginning so help me out and give me some tips.

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  • Akki333 at

    haha poor him!!XD

  • harkovast at

    You shouldn't explain who the characters are in the author notes. WE should be able to figure it out from the comic.

  • breath of life at

    This is really good! Better than what I can do. ^^

  • Mutation at

    The simple expression transition in the first two panels is a good idea, you need to get in the habit of drawing backgrounds more I'm thinking. Not every panel needs a person. n.n
    That's it for today's tip. Oh! But if there is anything specific you want to learn, just ask away. (Also, google up manga tutorials or the like. Constantly. That's how I learned the fastest.)

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