The Rebirth of Heizan

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Prologue: 01
Ryushin onThese two are brothers and sisters, Mieku (the guy) and Keianna, Mieku's sister. His sister has a habit of punching him across the room when he does something stupid. I'm still just beginning so help me out and give me some tips.
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haha poor him!!XD
harkovast at
You shouldn't explain who the characters are in the author notes. WE should be able to figure it out from the comic.
breath of life at
This is really good! Better than what I can do. ^^
Mutation at
The simple expression transition in the first two panels is a good idea, you need to get in the habit of drawing backgrounds more I'm thinking. Not every panel needs a person. n.n
That's it for today's tip. Oh! But if there is anything specific you want to learn, just ask away. (Also, google up manga tutorials or the like. Constantly. That's how I learned the fastest.)