The Reborn

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Reborn

on March 1, 2006

ZASH!
I like that sound! It was "SLASH!" in my orginal version, but I'm trying to be more creative. (Plus, "slash" reminds me of Pokemon. Adrian used Slash. It's a critical hit!)
XD
I don't like the last panel. I keep telling myself that the babies don't look good in close-up, but do I listen? Noooo!

On a more serious note…does this need a mature warning? Post your thoughts!