The Reborn

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I've mentioned that I've been making last minute changes to this script: this little scene orginally happened much earlier, but I thought it might be a good way to end the scene.

One problem that occasionlly crops up with Lulu is the way her bangs cover her eyes. It makes it hard to show her emotions, so I have to have to rely a lot more on her mouth and body language for her than for other characters. Lulu's line "I knew I never liked her" seems a bit weird with that little smile. If you could see her eyes, you'd see a sort of determined, truimphant look on her face.

I like Megan's line "tired and faint-y". I make up words a lot myself. Just the other night I tried to explain to my family that The Learning Channel isn't very "learning-ful" anymore.

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