The Sith Menace
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Page #3: Impact in ten seconds...
Zador onI might aswell do all of the original pages with the edits until we get to the versions that the scanner didn't screw up (and that I didn't color).
Anyhow, on with the intro, once again.
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While Crosa and the Dug Jedi try to find out if anyone else is alive onboard the B.L.A.Z.E, R4-F3 is viewing the holorecording orders he had received.
While watching the Jawa Jedi Master Ge-Swi Jogra's orders, R4-F3 sees another recording he had received from another Jedi - the now dead Gran.
In the cockpit of the ship, Crosa informs the Dug Jedi of the ship's countdown and realises that the ship's control's have been locked by someone with a code.
With ten seconds to spare, R4-F3 arrives at the cockpit with the now fixed elevator and begins to insert the code it had received from the Gran Jedi - 396-071.
Crosa pulls the controls to move to the left, but does he do it in time…?
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FACT #1: R4-F3 was seen in the second panel of the first comic page, making him the first character to be seen in the comic pages. If you watch closely, you will see that R4-F3 was fixing the right wing, an order he received from Ge-Swi, as seen in the first panel of this comic page.
FACT #2: In the original page of this third page, before I edited it with the new text for this version, Crosa did not recognise the Gran Jedi Master, the Dug Jedi had a few extra lines (which were either taken by Crosa or edited) and Crosa explained the security camera screens a bit differently. Ge-Swi's and the Gran's speaches were a bit different aswell.
FACT #3: In the second to last panel, a sith is standing in the room seen through the window.
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