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#012 - Dispute
WarWithin onSo i took some reader advice and fixed up the text I use on my pages so its not so pixely. I now have to go back and fix the text on pages 1-11 now!
But in this page we learn that the relationship between Nate and his father isn't all that it seemed to be back in page 3.
Feel free to comment/critique, I would really appreciate any and all feedback I can get!
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