The Temple of a Thousand Tears

Chapter 4: Into the Valley of Eternal Lament 9

on Jan. 6, 2008

The same artwork on this page as on the previous page in the story, but with a little more revealed about the swordsman's story, and what happened in the Valley. I'm all about giving away pieces and teasing the audience, but there's always that fear that people will either get what's going on too soon, or will not figure it out and then I have to explain it in detail later on - to me, that's a failure on my part as the writer.

Here's hoping that's not the case here. ;)

During the original scripting of this story, I revealed to some select people what actually happened in the Valley, and their reactions to the information that I gave them were mixed. I've been refining it ever since.

What do you guys all think happened in the Valley?

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