Third World Truth

Chapter 02 _ pg 18

on Sept. 17, 2007

Inking's getting better, don't you think? If you're tired of Yasuri not doing anything (like I am xD) then don't worry; she'll be up and about in a page or two. By the way, what kinds of things story wise do you think needs more clarification on? :0 The promise? Why Luz was locked away? I wanna know so I can better my story-telling skills. X_x

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