Despite some reservations about the art on this one, I think it's one of my better pages in terms of… well, humor. Which is really the important part, I guess. I did manage to laugh at one of my own jokes on this one, which is a nice change of pace.
I think I overdid it a bit with the dot-eyes look on Petty Officer, though. It's kind of cute in the first panel, but she just ends up looking like Chroma from Soul Eater in the last panel. It's sort of unsettling.
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