Thunder Roarer
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ZOMGWTF... Tom has Stubble.
IronWolf onSorry, chicillos, but this is going to be long.
- Firstly, MAJOR love to anyone with the patience to not yell at me after my prolonged absence. Also, major love to the new readers, and bonus major love to Jenshin and her swifty Thunder art. Go back a page and admire its coolness. I'm done with calculus and chemistry, and plan better time management in the future, so as to keep such delays from occuring.
- Secondly, I tried speech bubbles. Meh. However, I love the faces in the second and third panel. Taylor (of the Krae) believes Avar's face in the fifth panel is good; I'm not so sure.
- Thirdly, go to The Krae (http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Krae/), because the Krae artist and I swore a blood oath to update today… Okay, not really, but we should both be updating. No blood was exchanged, but we had popcorn from the same bowl, which probably counts as some kind of oath. ANyhow, she's really good and doesn't get all the love she deserves. This next page is hilarious. Go see her. Also, while you're on the humor circut, visit http://www,drunkduck.com/Gnoph/, where JillyFoo has just helped Mina_Lunga by filling in the blanks with her lovely madness. JillyFoo's homebase is http://www.drunkduck/The_Planet_Closest_To_Heaven/.
- This brings us to my fourth and final topic. During my mysterious absence, Tom was kidnapped by Mina_Lunga for said crossover joy. Tom wound up in a bleeding heap. Tom didn't get any licks in in JillyFoo's version, either. Of course, here at TBOTR, he has a possibly infected gut wound. In fact, let's review the sterling career of Mr. Nearford.
1.Tom steals Jacob's horse while Jacob beats the blazes out of his buddies. Some guy grazes Jake's face while Tom distracts him. Jacob beats up that guy. Even mounted, Tom he manages is to make Jacob slip on a rock and twist his ankle. Not sprain, even. Jacob tackles Tom, intimidates him, and uses him as a crutch.
2. Jacob scares the blazes out of Tom with a sword and the threat of torture. Tom cracks like a CD case under the tire of a Hummer. Tom whines to himself.
3. Tom spends time being scared by Jacob. He does not attempt escape. He does not tell Jacob to push off.
4. Tom rushes back to help Jacob in the ambush, swords one guy in the neck (his finest moment), then gets slashed across the stomach immediately. Tom falls off his horse. Jacob carries Tom and dumps him with a poisoned horse (I love Jake's tail), then stabs and slashes the remaining chaps. Tom's interference may or may not have helped Jacob.
5. Jacob and Tom undergo some buddy bonding. So do Tom and Eveline. Of course, throughout, Tom's lying there.
Now, I used to hate Tom. The rest of this story was planned. Tom was not. Tom was a surprise, and he didn't belong. I wanted to kill him off so badly. Then, the Krae girls convinced me to let him live a little longer (read, beyond Avar's arrival in the story), and I found out he was actually useful, storywise. Now, Tom's grown on me. There's a lot of reasons, but it can be summed up as such: My poor Tom. He tries so hard, yet accomplishes so very little. It seems that Tom cannot win. In some ways this amuses me, but nowadays I have a soft spot for my pansy guardsman. My poor, poor, inept, possibly dying Tom.
Moreso, because Tom's pushing his way in to my orderly universe left him with a really scary/cool father who you will all meet soon. He has stubble, too. (Tom just forgot to shave. For the curious, nearly everyone in my psuedomedievalistic world has ankle daggers. Did I show Jacob's once? … I forget. Anyhow, Tom's been shaving with his, but his gut wound distracted him today.) Tom's father is stubble-icious. I'll explain that to someone besides the Krae girls when Tom's scary daddy shows up.
Note my crafty use of internet slang in the title.
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Login or RegisterZoeStead at
Great page. I love the way you draw tails!
ejb at
I like the second and third panels the best.
Side-glancing Avar and crazy-haired Tom!
JuhFreak at
This is a really beautiful, original style you have. I love the watercolor background effects.
Dare to be different!
Mina_Lunga at
I'm joining in with the general accolades both for the second panel, and also for the improvement in your art. Your people have gained in style and personality while you were away! Poor Eveline, though - she's a rather plain and dumpy girl, isn't she? What a wonderfully refreshing change from the usual willowly beauty!
Heh. Tom's hair looks like an afro when it's all spread out on his pillow. And he DOES try, and that's part of his charm. Those are the characters which spring up and end up wresting much of the comic around themselves. . . and are the most fun to torment. Tom's a bit like Will that way, isn't he? Both meant to be throw-away, dead bodies, and now all we can do is make their lives miserable.
Fyrsiel at
Aaaah, my friend, the best characters come right out of the blank panels you first see when creating new pages. I think so much more can happen when you throw another, possibly unpredictible, character into the brew. And as we will learn about Tom, so, too, will you. What's funny is that he's already got a small fandom. xD That's mad skill, for an origionally random side character.
I am seeing a MAJOR improvement in art here! Lykewhooooaaaa! This is really good stuff! *dances around at another Thunder update xD*
JillyFoo at
Ooo there's some background to him yet. I always thought ol'Tom would become a love interest for Evenline.
Cheeko at
Your posts are always so entertaining to read. XD
The second panel I really like. It seems that in the time you've been gone you've been working on your art, and that makes the wait worthwhile. *hug*
Jenshin at
Something about the second panel really appeals to me! Whee!
Aah wow that's quite a lot you had to say.
I forgive all absenses that anyone makes, so long as they come back some day.
Yay for calc and chem being done with! Good luck to you in the future. Looking foreward to more comic!
Krae at
Ok, woah. An essay!
As you can see, I kept my part of the salt-and-butter-slathered oath as well.
Aren't you glad we convinced you to not kill Tom? Although I'm not so sure now, poor little bugger. I'm sure a festering gut wound is no cup of tea.
He needs more love. Possibly a warm scarf, some chicken noodle soup and a cup of tea :)