Time Breakers

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Dream "Man"'s Stage: Review 3: Adventures of Kitty Man

Ndraxian Zero

on Aug. 15, 2008

Yes Skull man is the shops owner. And in case its not clear that is in fact Plant Man in the Reaper get-up.

I've been wanting to work the Cossack bots in to the comic for a while now, but never actually have a reason to do so.

Now for the Review:

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Adventures_of_Kitty_Man/index.php

This comic hadn't been updated in a while, but since I was asked to review it I'm going to review it, who know this review may jump start it alive again. The plot, well the basic premise of the comic is decent enough to actually work, but the delivery isn't so good. The comic jumps around a bit, which is okay, but you tend to jump oddly, and made a sudden switch between future and present plot lines (speaking timeline wise). Whats really killing the comic is the overuse of fillers. One really shouldn't start with a filler, ever. A Title page is alright. Fillers should only really be used to make up a day for comics with a clear update schedule greater than once a month. And of course holidays and specail events. Notice of a hiatus is also okay as long as most of the comic isn't fillers. As a general rule, if the comic is more than 1/3 filler you're likely using far too many of them. Sprite wise the comic isn't bad, its not masterful, but it's around average-just above average.