Time Breakers

Dream Man's Stage: Review 4: Emerald Adventures

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Dream Man's Stage: Review 4: Emerald Adventures

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A new enemy attacks from off camera. Just what sort of attack just hit Megaman? And does Zero actually know how many flowers he bought?

Sorry for the wait. Classes and work started for me recently. That and I finally ended up downloading Fraxy. Its full of win.
And the truck in the last two panels took sometime.
But the main reason was a bit of writers block. The level design presented a bit of a problem. You see I wanted to introduce at least on new enemy every major section. But this section has two windows right next to each other with spike pits nearby. And the next enemy should really be next to a spike pit. But I didn't want to cut the reviews too short. I finally decided on this method. The enemy attacked in the fourth to last panel from off panel.
And the Zero gets flowers mini-arc continues.

Now for the review.

Emerald Adventures
http://www.drunkduck.com/Emerald_Adventures/index.php
(I really wish I knew how to directly link you guys to it…)

This is another average comic. It has potential as well… But frankly its too short as of now. Which makes it hard to review.
Theres a few cliches here and there, and Metal sonic was swayed to rebel far too easily. Should have either been more work, or something to suggest metal was going to betray him anyways. The current way is bland an makes Metal look stupid. I should mention I like the fact Cosmo made an appearance. (side note: Other than the machines, Tails is my favorite sonic charector. And therefore Cosmo is also a favorite. Although I'm a little ticked that something didn't happen in the series she appear but… I digress.)
I also like how you addressed the change of sprites for the main villain.
Graphically, its still average, you could use better effects for sure, but except for the very begining, there's nothing too badly made. Except the new shoes. Inverse color effect only look good for certain effects, a specail shoe coloring is not one of them. Now if you just want them the opposite color, inverse and then switch the new highlights and shadows. Then it will look right.
(and sometimes you can get some pretty neat shades.) Sorry for the short review, but there isn't much too review, and I don't want my reviews to sound C+P.

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