Tracing Ciel

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Dubiosity

on June 23, 2009

Sorry, a somewhat lazy page. and I know the text seems…abrupt…I haven't really gotten the flow of the story going yet. XP

Harkovast: Thank you for teh five!And don't worry, I wasn't expecting a full critique, just wanted some feedback on what was working or wasn't workign for you as an audience. :) So thank you for that.

Idrawwithamouse: haha, it was deliberate. but I do suppose I could have reversed the gradient so that it was lighter on blindingly sunny…then turned dark on "no forewarning"..
Thank you for your feedback! [[And i draw with a mouse too.:) ]]
This is all really helpful! And as promised…I'll be sure to take a look at your works! :D