Page by myself. Also, please note that the placeholder page 3 has been replaced with the good art. Go look and bask in its awesomeness.
And so there actually starts some action. I switched around some dialogue here. The first line was supposed to be on the last page, but I forgot it, so I put it here instead (and it may work better). Also, I shifted over Sparkle's dialogue because I didn't draw her in panel 4 and therefore it would have been difficult to know who's talking. Plus, it makes more sense to put the last line on the last panel.
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