Trapped in a Comic

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  barry_everard at 17 Oct, 2007, 04:00 AM

  Looks good so far. I'm assuming you're going for a kinda soap opera with a hint of black comedy? Interested to see if we'll find out what he did in the government. The story reads a bit like one of those old Private Eye novels… mayhaps he can take that up as his new job!

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  reboundcomic at 16 Oct, 2007, 02:30 PM

  I like the fact that you are striving to make the characters multi dimensional. It can be too easy to make each a stereotype (the playa, the ho, the nice girl who is getting used).

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  ljs5123 at 16 Oct, 2007, 01:38 PM

  Great comic!!!

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  _T_ at 16 Oct, 2007, 11:32 AM

  The panel where she's pushing him away has some great lighting. It's definately good to add more character to Butta.