Trapped in a Comic

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MrSynnerster
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Originally Butta character was suppose to be simply a sex pot everyone wanted to hook up with, but as I started writing this, I wanted to give her much more personality, and I think this page starts to bring that across.

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  • barry_everard at

    Looks good so far. I'm assuming you're going for a kinda soap opera with a hint of black comedy? Interested to see if we'll find out what he did in the government. The story reads a bit like one of those old Private Eye novels… mayhaps he can take that up as his new job!

  • reboundcomic at

    I like the fact that you are striving to make the characters multi dimensional. It can be too easy to make each a stereotype (the playa, the ho, the nice girl who is getting used).

  • ljs5123 at

    Great comic!!!

  • _T_ at

    The panel where she's pushing him away has some great lighting. It's definately good to add more character to Butta.

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