Triple Torture

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Witchcraft

Fly Hue

on Dec. 29, 2008

Looking back on that last page, the dialog didn't read the same way that it originally did, and it's bothering me. I might go back and redo it.

I'm annoyed with this page also just because there's so much writing on it. It's way too busy. But, I'm pretty sure the dialog follows right with out straying too much off course, so I'm not going to sweat it too much. Actually… Crud. The scene switch doesn't work at all. I'm going to have to redo this also.

So… I guess I'll post my edited pages to-morrow along with my regular update. Enjoy this for now. :/
Oh! And the grey text is just some Sinatra. Ati's singing, but you would have just been able to find that out if you had the next page. DX
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