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Page 22 - A new truth

dragonsong12

on Feb. 26, 2006

Well…a little bit of self-doubt there, which will likely be good for him in the long run provided he doesn't take it too far.
I like Jaith though. I don't really intend to paint him as the dumb goofball, he just likes to make light of situations, which is a characteristic that easygoing people tend to have. The over-srious dramatic look at the bottom when he's really just whining about being left out was kinmda fun, though I don't think it works as well as I'd hoped.
Still, this shows some building camraderie between the three, which in truth, they may have had before this all even began, and they simply didn't realize it, being too held back by their roles.
The next page will be the last one of this chapter. That's about all the character building I can take with these two (I'm lying, that's exactly how I wrote it, it just seems to run so much longer at a page a week) And after we'll move on to develop another character…then I'll consider starting the story ^_^;

For fun, enjoy this pic of Ry
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23375145/