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Page 4 - preperations

dragonsong12

on Aug. 13, 2006

So…MUCH…Talking
That's 18 speech bubbles thar. I had initially intended this to be two pages, but in the interest of moving things along CRAMMED IT ALL INTO ONE HAH I hate covering up characters with text, but I think it works okay since Tren is supposed to be background here.
With the exceptions of Ralla in panel 1 and Bradley's hand in panel 5, I'm fairly happy with the look of this one. Though I wish I's changed the camera angle in the last panel so that 5 and 6 weren't the same…ah well.

Now I know alarm bells are probably going off in all your heads right about now (Tren's too hehe) since you know he's quite villanous, but no, no one will really question it. This adventure of his seems just to be some rich boy's game, and that's anyone will really take it as. Except maybe Bradley. Does anyone else get the feeling there's some kind of battle of wills happening there in thst panel XD That wasn't intentional, the characters did it themselves.
Ralla's wonderful in the last panel was SUPPOSED to be the last word, but since I couldn't figure out a way to do that, she's just off to the side talking to herself. I don't really mind, cuz I hate her *cackle*. I really need to start getting into her character, or I'll have dug her in too deep. But there's other characters to introduce first…

slow slow writing me…
Thanks for reading See you all next week