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Page 13 - Preperations

dragonsong12

on Oct. 15, 2006

This is another "set-up of following page" page…I write out the scripts, and there's just too much to make it one page, so I have to split it into two.

For once I wasn't trying desperately to cram in dialogue though. I like having lots of room ^_^

It kind of amused me to make Tren not be put-out by Tai-ra's response to his warning (which would be the natural inclination), but rather impressed. And of course he's talking to himself again…only it's a bit more deliberate on my part this time instead of accidental. XD

In other news, I've planned out the next two chapters, both of which will take place at Nareth's home. "When are we gonna get this story started?" you may ask. (I would) Well, there's actually going to be a bunch of plot stuff in the stop-over at Nareth's, so while it will be rather static, I don't think it will be boring. (or rather, I hope it won't be) I've got five story "beats" I want to hit in that chapter, and in between them I'm putting some character stuff to break it up a little. I hope it comes out okay.

Thanks for reading! I'll see you next week!
(…dude, I should trademark that as a catch phrase or something…)