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Page 15 - Day's Travel

dragonsong12

on Oct. 29, 2006

Kinda boring….oops… ^_^ Needed a transition from one place to the other though.

I had a hard time decided whether to have the narrator do this, or to have Tren thinking about it. I went with the narrator because it read more like a voice-over than what he was thinking at the moment, and I wasn't sure how to portray his voice-over without it seeming like it was thye narrator anyway. So I just went with the narrator. Not sure it was the right choice, but it was the one I went with XD

Art's passable here. It could be better, but it could be a lot worse, I'll take it ^_^

I WAS TWO PAGES AHEAD! And now I am none ahead ;_; I is a sad…oh well. there WILL be no breaks at least until the chapter ends (and then only one) I have a reputation to maintain after all, deadlines are part of it.

Thanks for reading! I'll see you all next week!