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Ch. 5 Page 17

dragonsong12

on April 15, 2007

Tren! The first rule of anything is you never ever ask questions like that! It's like saying "at least it can't get any worse"! You silly, silly fellow!
The original text for that last panel was a bit harsher, but I decided not to do that…for one: Tai-ra would not stand for it. She is loyal regardless. And for two: We all know Tren's bark is worse than his bite, and it's much to early for anything major, so I didn't want to get your hopes up ;)

I'm mostly satisfied with the art. I'm a little dissapointed at the neatness of the pens. Jaith looked a LOT more messed up in pencil, but those are the limitations I must work with and if I don't challenge myself what's the point, ne? ;) I really love Jaith in panel 3 though and Tren's eyes in the second panel came out well…Also…ain't Jaith all cute and sympathetic in the last one? XD Originally Tai was there too, but I cut her out, she was messing it up somehow…too much clutter I guess, and she wasn't as visually important there as Jaith.

Thank for reading! I will see you next week! :)