Author notes

Ch. 8 Page 21

dragonsong12

on Aug. 17, 2008

So if you didn't notice my note on the last page, Jaith was not supposed to have spoken on the previous page. The text that was mistakenly attributed to him was supposed to be Tai's. I will be fixing that, just not sure if it will ever show on the site and this rate…Anyway, that's important because THIS page is where you get Jaith's response.
His loyalty doesn't run nearly as deep as Tai's, but "Master Nareth" is still very important. He's just a lot more easy going than her, I didn't see loyalty being as big of a concern (especially since such strong loyalty is not so common among boetheri, though they're much more likely to be loyal to individuals than say a government, or a faction. Probably why you don't see too many uprisings…)

This page is technically the last of this scene. There will be a bonus page…probably Sunday if I can get it done, but it's going to be there for those reading the archives, because this isn't an adequate page for changing scenes pacing-wise. It will just be one image, no text, so I didn't want to waste an update on it. If I can't get it done before Monday, I'll just upload it later on and slip it into place. It's more for pacing than story, so Monday's page will take precedence.

On the contests, I didn't get too many entries! I'd be disappointed, except that it means I don't have to pick a winner! Everyone who entered won! I will be posting the entries later this week and contacting those who submitted.
Thanks so much!

Thanks for reading! See you next week!