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Ch. 12 Page 11

dragonsong12

on March 28, 2010

Well, I guess I'll have to take back my joke that all the characters do in this is stand around and talk.
It HAS been pretty easy to do dialogue on these pages though.

I'm not really terribly fond of this page, though, it's not bad, but I don't think it's as strong as the ones before it. It's not dynamic enough. But the plus side of making pages that disappoint, is that you learn from them. I took a look, figured what bothered me, and fixed it. So the next couple of pages are far more dynamic. Whoo!

Thanks for reading! See you next week!