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Ch. 12 Page 19

dragonsong12

on May 23, 2010

Tai-ra is not to be messed with.
…mostly just because she's much faster than him and knows more about what she's doing.

I'm a little sad that this page doesn't really have the punch I always imagined it having. I'm still not good enough with action scenes, I suppose, but her hand looks to gentle and there's not supposed to be anything gentle about it. She's grabbing his jaw and wrenching his head up.
…but you can only re-draw a scene so many times before you have to just go with it.
That said, I like the way this looks, everything looks good. Just not how I want it, if that makes any sense.

I just finished writing out the script for next chapter and I'm VERY pleased with it. Can't wait to get there! :D

Thanks for reading everyone! And for all the comments while I was away! See you next week!