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Two Moons - 425

Jenshin

on Nov. 22, 2007

So I lied about going to work… False hope, that. The company can't get the keys to the building to work in.
Bah. I don't trust this. Maybe I shouldn't go with this company.

So this chapter.. this story.. It should really its own comic, its own story, or some other entity, unto itself, but I'm not going to write it. So you get it all in flashes and can fill in the details yourself.

Happy thanksgiving for those in the U.S. I had no idea it was thanksgiving until my sister called me this morning.. Heh oops.

Respondy -

Alejkhan - Not yay work!
Yeah, this is going to be a big chunk of backstory.

DAJB - Thanks!
Aah.. not celebrating yet..

qswtbt - Sorry I skipped you! I still can't figure out what your name means…
Yah, it's a flashback.

winzrella - Well.. maybe not..
Heh here goes my English teaching power.
You said -
I'm just gonna sit down and see what you have for us to tell about Rhync.
Good, your grammar is actually really good! The only thing I have to say is when you put "see what you have for us " next to "to tell about Rhync", it took me a few seconds to realize where the break in the clauses were. Sooo.. It's more natural if you said something like - "see what you have to tell us about Rhync." It's slightly different, but it's less confusing.

PeiPei - Thanks!

Tantz Aerine - Awww I don't have a job yet! Grrrr I'm so angry.

Inidias - No thanksgiving for me.. damn.

Darwin - I don't think life flashes before your eyes if you're gonna die.. All the times in my life I thought I was going to die, nothing was flashing before my eyes.

Yah, I still don't have a job yet. Japan can be fairly cheap if you don't have a car and have someone to share the rent with, actually. Like.. food here is SO cheap. So I'm doing okay. But it's still nerve wracking to not have a job.. Taking deep breaths everytime I go to the ATM.

Ryjia - Glad you like them!!

Rockster - Hello.

JillyFOo - Oo, that's the first time I've been complimented on my pacing. Good to know it's decent!

Thanks everyone,
-Jenshin