TwoMoons

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Two Moons - 481

Jenshin

on April 29, 2008

I have to say, I am quite proud of this page.

Respondy -

Katch - Yay shower!

Alej - Glad you like the panels.
Aw I didn't draw anything in time.. wait maybe you're a day behind me, maybe I can still draw something.

Ryjia - Yeah, I didn't think it had, but looking back.. you're right, everything fits together more now.

Iagojester - Oo.. First, I don't think it's anything different from the rest of my comic.. there are pipes and naked people all over the place.. So that's why I was curious why this scene has particular grounds for kimoi. Hmmm..

Then you said the thing about the eyes so I guess I will give a bit of an explanation.

Water, nakedness, are both things I see as purity… You're born that way, with water and nakedness. I want this scene to portray the freshness of taking a shower, being clean, rebirth, washing away all your sins. I want the reader to feel Issen's joy in that.

At the same time, pleasure doesn't come without pain. At the same time that Issen is enjoying himself, Cyff has been turned in to Genesis and is distressed as she's arrested..

And EG, he is behind all of this. He is behind Issen's freedom, and Cyff's arrest. He is the cause for everything. Neither character can rid theirselves of him.

Why are his eyes at that level? Because it's in the center of the page and I needed something to break up and connect the two sides with. I could've put it a little higher, but I already drew a rock there, and I really liked the folds in Cyff's pants. So I think you're reading too much into this!

Cthonic Cultist - Well Cyff knew it was coming..

DAJB - Don't we all, don't we all.
Oh by the way, I took a few looks at your comic to see this famous naked male form. And indeed he exists! He's actually quite an interesting looking character.

- Jenshin