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#4 - The Hill People page 4

Banes

on Dec. 7, 2011

Behind the Secret Door:



I think Penelope hears TK wake up and that's when she wakes up. That's cute to me.



In real life, if I lived with a sister/brother/roommate, I wouldn't be so charmed by it…


Tried something a little different here, with the character/background tones, just for fun.




One line that seems out of character for Penelope is the "Hiking? S'weird." Hm. Something I might want to change.




But for now, I'd put it down to her being half asleep. Still, it sounds more like something Wade would say.