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Poor Poor Theodore Goes to the Park

jca3d

on March 21, 2010

I hope you can tell what's going on… one of my friends said they had to read it several times to notice what was wrong with him (after stepping in poop). I can always go back & change it for more clarity if need be. My screen tends to be brighter than others, though, so the browns might mix together and such… I don't know; I've tried to fix my display settings, but it's not the same.

Feedback is appreciated. If I want to do better (and I always do) then it's pretty necessary.