Uncouth

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7. Discogator Recolor

Eirikr

on Dec. 16, 2007

This is the first of 2 updates today. There will be another later.

This was an old bonus vote page I did for Nonsensical Ravings. I found it today, and I decided to redo the coloring, to reduce the crappiness of it. I also blacked out the panels divisions that stated things like '15 minutes later' and '…even later'. I become good enough now to realize that panels indicating a passage of time are only truly effective if the scene has changed drastically, or in some cases, stayed the exact same. This does neither, so the boxes are blackened.

Also, while I hate doing redos, and I prefer to leave the past in the past, this one was just too bad to ignore.

Also, if you care to see how it compares to the original, follow this link:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Uncouth/gfx/comic the 1st.jpg