Under Fire

Chapter 1 Page 7

on July 5, 2010

Apologies AGAIN for Sparks' mouth. Again.

Adrian is supposed to be shaking in the last panel, but these don't really show it well. I tried basic motion lines, but those didn't really do it either. Suggestions will be much appreciated and tried out for later.

Thanks and sorry to everyone who checked in on the comic over the weekend, only to find nothing new there – I need a better way to communicate with my readers in between pages. What works for you?

Comments

Please login to comment.

${ comment.author }} at ${ comment.date_added }}
- ${ comment.author }} at ${ comment.date_added }}

Author notes

Comments

${ comment.author }} at ${ comment.date_added }}

${ comment.author }} at ${ comment.date_added }}