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Chapter F2: Escalation | Part 5

ccznen

on March 16, 2022

I usually try to position characters so the speech bubbles can sit in natural places. If I don’t do that well, sometimes I end up moving lines of dialogue forward or backward a panel. Panel 3 is the first time I had to resort to crossing the bubble tails. I generally try to avoid this practice because it makes the dialogue confusing to read.

At least panel 6 redeemed things a bit. I think that may be my favorite punchline I've written so far.