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Chapter F2: Escalation | Part 8

ccznen

on March 26, 2022

I originally wrote Meg’s last line as “You were saying?”, but I didn’t like how rude it felt. Meg can be very irreverent, but I don’t think she would outright disrespect Mortagast like that. As a general rule, I don’t want these characters to disrespect each other. Meg’s snarks at Penelope are an exception to that rule, but that’s intended to be a place for character development to happen in the future.