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on Sept. 4, 2008

(For anyone who missed it, we're still in a flashback to a couple days ago.)

I decided to start spelling Meredith correctly. I considered it before, but… eh. I figure now is a good time, since she officially gets a last name. (The last name is a nod to a friend of mine who is rather fond of Meredith.) I am rather proud of Meredith/Mike subplot. It has only been suggested before, but the connection is made solid on this page. Here, my astute (and patient!) readers, are some relevant pages to jog your memories: 131, 139, & 541

I'm not really happy with the last line simply because it can be taken different ways, but every other way I put it is the same (I'll watch out for him) or a little too much (I'll be his bodyguard). So, I hope you did read it the way it was intended. Yuki was intending to warn Mike and watch his back – Hmm… "watch his back…" – Doesn't sound right. :-/

amanda: And grammar is hot.

ghostrunner: Deep.

Peipei: Domestic violence is depressing and a little too "real." -_-

trevor: I'm still in shock. I never win anything.

patrick: I knew what you meant, so I don't know why I wandered off on a tangent… But yeah, not someone you want to tick off – even if he is a good scapegoat. And thank you. I love dialogue. It's sort of my pitfall in prose, because I use too much and run out of synonyms for "said."