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usedbooks

on March 2, 2009

The speech in panel two was rewritten twice to make sure the statements were complete but concise. I could have gone into greater detail, but I pride myself on summarizing and keeping dialogue brief. (No lengthy soliloquies around here.)

I hate writing fights. They make me uncomfortable. And fights about men (or women or whatever love/dating interests one has) are the most uncomfortable, heated, and pointless things of all. That's why I kept it as abbreviated as possible.

One more note today, Jiro was wandering around Cricket's Creature, exploring the alleys and causing a distraction. ~_^

ghostrunner: She should have listed it twice. XD

Peipei: The simple answer is, he'll do nothing. Raidon is good at playing the "innocent" party. Why fight when others will fight for you?

Tantz: Blurting things out is a nice fast way to reveal them – or to cause a big fight.

amanda: True. He should know Yuki better than that by now. She was the one who arrested him. Seiko, on the other hand, tends to be unpredictable.

patrick: Mr. Clover is a talented vocalist and pianist trying to make it as an independent musician/songwriter. Right now he mostly plays in hotel lobbies and restaurants.

Warpedwenger: She hasn't had time yet. She will.

JustNoPoint: Detective Conan likes to reveal killers when he's alone with the killer. A couple times, he actually said, "I've not told the police yet. The only people who know are you and me."

LanceDanger: Well, that's good. ^_^;

DAJB: There's no time like the present. Besides, the evening wasn't going as nicely as it seemed. What we saw as a pleasant date was more like a day-long brainwashing session.